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A tad more buildup/conversation/seduction request


 

Just a little more of a buildup to the action would be excellent! Among the myriad of reasons I love the Zoe & Kacey scene

is that it doesn't just jump into the action -- there is a little of a buildup that just makes that first kiss between the

two sizzle even more. Even just a minute or so where the girls walk into the room together or something would be

super!



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If you search the forum you will find a few topics regarding this matter.

I agree with you we need some buildup in some scenes, not all though. But the scene you mention i remember is very tame and wasn't any one i really liked, and i am a big Zoe Britton fan but that didn't help this one sadly.

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Sauron81 wrote:

If you search the forum you will find a few topics regarding this matter.

I agree with you we need some buildup in some scenes, not all though. But the scene you mention i remember is very tame and wasn't any one i really liked, and i am a big Zoe Britton fan but that didn't help this one sadly.


 

I'm not sure why searching the forums for topics (or matter) is a thing... that I should do... But whatever.

And I was saying that I, as a consumer, LOVE the Zoe/Kacey scene. LOVE it, BECAUSE of the buildup

where they're talking. If it's "very tame" to you, then, well, it's very tame to you. We can agree that

Zoe Britton is the bee's knees, tho, wot?



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